Thursday, March 08, 2007

Metamorphosis

anger
lay her head
in my lap
she burnt a hole
in my heart
and left me
gasping
hurting
like a fish
out of water
smarting
like a fist
in a wall
she’s now gone
and all I feel
is deadly cold

PoP © 7 March 07

4 comments:

TOTOBAYA said...

By God you are a poet! How do you capture life in such simple ways that blast my brain away?

writerwoman said...

Love this one. Love all the pain and loss and love that resonates from it.

Shell said...

utterly breathtaking ...

Debbie said...

Your ability to describe in detail is excellent. Thoroughly enjoyed!